revise my essay 26

I will attach below the directions and the essay.
Can provide the sources if needed.
Comments made by teacher for revision:
The essay relies on too many long quotes. I would scale them back to only quoting what is essential to developing your points. The analysis looks sparse as a result of the heavy quoting. Limit the long/block style quotes to no more than two for this paper and expand on the analysis as you revise.
 
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